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two corpses, everything's fine - The Mortal Instruments: The Five Girls Jace Wishes He Hadn't Slept With and the Reason Why
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16 January 2011 @ 03:14 pm
The Mortal Instruments: The Five Girls Jace Wishes He Hadn't Slept With and the Reason Why
This was fantastic. I don't even know where to start - his jealousy about "how far" with Simon, how he dissects every previous encounter, your explanation (that I quite like) about Tessa's future (heck yes Tessa/Will)...all of it. Thanks so much for sharing!
Thank you so much! Yeah, I have no idea where things are really going with Tessa (and I actually think she has something with Jem at least for a while, until he dies), but being the new owner of The Pandemonium Club was a theory I saw thrown out somewhere and was actually the inspiration for this whole fic!
THis is really well-written and lovely. I like sexy things best when the descriptions are lyrical and have more imagery to them than just 'smut!'and you pulled that off wonderfully here. (Also, it occurred to me for the first time that Kaelie's name sounds like Kaye's! Pixies ftw!)
And I really love the idea of Tessa being an immortal and owner of the Pandemonium Club. And longing so much for Will that she takes a shine to a boy she barely knows who is EXACTLY LIKE HIM.
And I really love the idea of Tessa being an immortal and owner of the Pandemonium Club. And longing so much for Will that she takes a shine to a boy she barely knows who is EXACTLY LIKE HIM.
Thank you!
Yeah, I was really interested when CC said that the woman with pale brown hair speaking to Magnus at the end of CoG -- who looks familiar to Clary -- was Tessa. I kind of feel like Tessa might be kind of a "super nephilim" the way that Clary and Jace are (but more? IDK, the Change thing screws up my theory, LOL) and that Clary's future will be like hers, whatever that is. I don't know! I'm intrigued, though, and I wanted to put some of that into the story.
Thanks again!
Yeah, I was really interested when CC said that the woman with pale brown hair speaking to Magnus at the end of CoG -- who looks familiar to Clary -- was Tessa. I kind of feel like Tessa might be kind of a "super nephilim" the way that Clary and Jace are (but more? IDK, the Change thing screws up my theory, LOL) and that Clary's future will be like hers, whatever that is. I don't know! I'm intrigued, though, and I wanted to put some of that into the story.
Thanks again!
This is so, so wonderful. Your writing style really makes the story, but your characterizations seal the deal. Just a beautiful read.
Thank you for sharing!
Thank you for sharing!
Wow, thank you so much! That's a high compliment coming from you.
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
Thank you!!
Sigh. Somehow I thought TMI's fandom was really active. It is on the rest of the internet! Where are the people on LJ?
Sigh. Somehow I thought TMI's fandom was really active. It is on the rest of the internet! Where are the people on LJ?
Freakin' beautiful. And I really do love Tessa here as a stunning, ageless woman :)
Thank you! Yeah, my Inspiration Meter rocketed off the charts when Cassie Clare said that Tessa was the woman with "a cloud of pale brown hair" who Magnus is talking to at the end of CoG!
Wow! This is amazing!
I never really thought whether Jace was a virgin or not. I just accepted the fact it was untold. Now you got me thinking.
:)
I never really thought whether Jace was a virgin or not. I just accepted the fact it was untold. Now you got me thinking.
:)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading. :)
super fantasiticness. clary and jace are just wow
Thank you so much!
Absolutely LOVED this one!! You did a totally GREAT job!
Thank you very much!
This is amazing! Fantastically written, I loved it :) <3
Thank you so much!
This was absolutely beautiful. I have just started reading TMI fanfiction and I'm so glad I clicked on this. It's so sensual and sexy and Jace. Gahhhhhh I'm pretty much in love with this <3 And I love the way you included Tessa! Her section just made my heart break.
Thank you so, so much! ^_^ I'm so excited that someone read it and liked it. ♥
That was beautiful! I really love how Jace has regrets about the girls after he met Clary, and his jealousy about Simon. We all know he will ask something about them some time.
Thank you so much!
I think so, too. I'll be disappointed if he and Clary never have a real talk about South Carolina before going there, you know?
I think so, too. I'll be disappointed if he and Clary never have a real talk about South Carolina before going there, you know?
Oh, I love this. So in character- might as well be written by Cassie Clare herself. :)
Great job!
Great job!
Thank you so much!












































