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two corpses, everything's fine - ONE DIRECTION: Incandescence
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07 January 2012 @ 02:53 am
ONE DIRECTION: Incandescence
Loved it, you have a way with words. :)
Thanks so much!
this was beautiful and expressive. your words, descriptions and analogies of the boys were ones of poetry, pure, liquid like gold that smoothed right off the screen and into my brain. i was enthralled and a little taken a back of the amount of power in this short piece. i encourage you to please write more for this fandom. you're quite amazing.
Thanks so much! :)
Oh, this is beautiful. I absolutely love this insight into Liam's mind. The picture with the boys orbitting each other all in different ways that you drew was absolutely lovely. *happy sigh* It's bittersweet that Harry seems not to fit into the space Liam has open for him, but you manage to make it sound not entirely that bad.
Anyway, I adore this. I hope to see more from you! :D
Anyway, I adore this. I hope to see more from you! :D
Thanks so much!
I like all of your lines individually too :D this was sort of ouchy to read, but so apt and insightful at the same time. Your voice is so poetic, which I love and it reads beautifully ♥ ♥
Thanks so much!
(Anonymous) on January 7th, 2012 11:57 am (UTC)
This is probably the weirdest, most amazing 1D one-shot I’ve ever read. Omg. I’ll never see Harry the same way again. I got this weird image of Harry being the sun, bright and burning and independant and beautiful, and the boys being like the planets surrounding him, depending on one another, in synthony, which I guess was the idea of the fic. Either that or I have too much imagination
Thanks so much!
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I LOVE THIS AND 1D AND YOU AND UGH I CAN'T BREATHE AND I JUST WANT TO SCOOP LIAM INTO MY ARMS AND DIEEEEE.
I LOVE THIS AND 1D AND YOU AND UGH I CAN'T BREATHE AND I JUST WANT TO SCOOP LIAM INTO MY ARMS AND DIEEEEE.
I LOVE YOU, TOO! ♥ eeee
Thanks so much!
Thanks so much!
I don't really have words (you've taken them away from me!)....but this is LOVELY <3
Thanks so much!
I'm so glad you got into this fandom. Like, there are no words to express how happy I am.
This fic is so beautiful. I love the idea of it and how it takes the boys' co-dependency to a whole new level. I loved number four a lot, seeing how all the boys fit into Liam. Sigh. This whole thing is made of heartwrenching rainbows, and I love it.
This fic is so beautiful. I love the idea of it and how it takes the boys' co-dependency to a whole new level. I loved number four a lot, seeing how all the boys fit into Liam. Sigh. This whole thing is made of heartwrenching rainbows, and I love it.
\o/ Yay! Thanks so much!
I love when Liam is angsty, and you write beautifully, so this was a perfect combination! <333333
Thanks so much!
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Thanks so much! And sure, thanks for letting me know! :)
this is so beautiful and poetic and just so, so lovely. it is perfect.
Thanks so much!
This is so breathtakingly beautiful and also heart wrenching at the same time. You have an amazing way with words and I love the way you convey Liam and his relationship to the other boys. I really loved this. I am adding you, I hope that is alright.
Thanks so much! And sure, thanks for letting me know! :)
this is stunning. I love the entire concept of Harry as the thing that draws them all together and the way you pull all the elements of that together and the prose itself. so gorgeous. ♥
this is so so so lovely. It's beautiful.
Ack, delayed reply (on my part) is delayed.
Thank you!!
Thank you!!
Ugh, this is so pretty and I thought it was going to have a sad ending. I'm ridiculously relieved it didn't.
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Beautiful, practically poetry. I haven't read a fic about the boys as good as this, and I doubt I ever will. You really have a way with words. Amazing, amazing, amazing. I just want to hug Liam now- and you.
(Delayed thank you -- the new link is here!)
this was beautiful, ty for this. i've taken a liking to liam POV atm, and this is written with such clarity. thanks again! x
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I am absolutely in love with this. This is just beautiful, oh my word. You really got all the characters spot on, I hope you write more in this fandom :)












































