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namelessscarletxqueen on January 7th, 2012 09:53 am (UTC)
Loved it, you have a way with words. :)
i aim my arrows high: 1D → Zalarryaimmyarrowshigh on January 9th, 2012 09:32 am (UTC)
Thanks so much!
ellelove_wilts on January 7th, 2012 09:54 am (UTC)
this was beautiful and expressive. your words, descriptions and analogies of the boys were ones of poetry, pure, liquid like gold that smoothed right off the screen and into my brain. i was enthralled and a little taken a back of the amount of power in this short piece. i encourage you to please write more for this fandom. you're quite amazing.

i aim my arrows high: 1D → Zalarryaimmyarrowshigh on January 9th, 2012 09:33 am (UTC)
Thanks so much! :)
colazitron: Harry is a fairy tale princesscolazitron on January 7th, 2012 11:12 am (UTC)
Oh, this is beautiful. I absolutely love this insight into Liam's mind. The picture with the boys orbitting each other all in different ways that you drew was absolutely lovely. *happy sigh* It's bittersweet that Harry seems not to fit into the space Liam has open for him, but you manage to make it sound not entirely that bad.

Anyway, I adore this. I hope to see more from you! :D
i aim my arrows high: 1D → Zalarryaimmyarrowshigh on January 9th, 2012 09:33 am (UTC)
Thanks so much!
cat: harryhoodaestivalblue on January 7th, 2012 11:36 am (UTC)
I like all of your lines individually too :D this was sort of ouchy to read, but so apt and insightful at the same time. Your voice is so poetic, which I love and it reads beautifully ♥ ♥
i aim my arrows high: 1D → Zalarryaimmyarrowshigh on January 9th, 2012 09:33 am (UTC)
Thanks so much!
(Anonymous) on January 7th, 2012 11:57 am (UTC)
This is probably the weirdest, most amazing 1D one-shot I’ve ever read. Omg. I’ll never see Harry the same way again. I got this weird image of Harry being the sun, bright and burning and independant and beautiful, and the boys being like the planets surrounding him, depending on one another, in synthony, which I guess was the idea of the fic. Either that or I have too much imagination
i aim my arrows high: 1D → Zalarryaimmyarrowshigh on January 9th, 2012 09:34 am (UTC)
Thanks so much!
girl from the north country: we began to laugh → tbtrbedroomlitany on January 7th, 2012 03:30 pm (UTC)
;_______________;

I LOVE THIS AND 1D AND YOU AND UGH I CAN'T BREATHE AND I JUST WANT TO SCOOP LIAM INTO MY ARMS AND DIEEEEE.
i aim my arrows high: 1D → Zalarryaimmyarrowshigh on January 9th, 2012 09:34 am (UTC)
I LOVE YOU, TOO! ♥ eeee

Thanks so much!
Becca_wheniamqueen_x on January 7th, 2012 06:02 pm (UTC)
I don't really have words (you've taken them away from me!)....but this is LOVELY <3
i aim my arrows high: 1D → Zalarryaimmyarrowshigh on January 9th, 2012 09:34 am (UTC)
Thanks so much!
Cricket: One Directioncaddyeverafter7 on January 7th, 2012 06:53 pm (UTC)
I'm so glad you got into this fandom. Like, there are no words to express how happy I am.

This fic is so beautiful. I love the idea of it and how it takes the boys' co-dependency to a whole new level. I loved number four a lot, seeing how all the boys fit into Liam. Sigh. This whole thing is made of heartwrenching rainbows, and I love it.
i aim my arrows high: 1D → Zalarryaimmyarrowshigh on January 9th, 2012 09:34 am (UTC)
\o/ Yay! Thanks so much!
Darcieilikehumanflesh on January 7th, 2012 07:08 pm (UTC)
I love when Liam is angsty, and you write beautifully, so this was a perfect combination! <333333
i aim my arrows high: 1D → Zalarryaimmyarrowshigh on January 9th, 2012 09:34 am (UTC)
Thanks so much!
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i aim my arrows high: 1D → Zalarryaimmyarrowshigh on January 9th, 2012 09:35 am (UTC)
Thanks so much! And sure, thanks for letting me know! :)
kk_sewell1d on January 7th, 2012 10:49 pm (UTC)
this is so beautiful and poetic and just so, so lovely. it is perfect.
i aim my arrows high: 1D → Zalarryaimmyarrowshigh on January 9th, 2012 09:35 am (UTC)
Thanks so much!
it's a lovers final breath.laymedowntorest on January 9th, 2012 12:24 am (UTC)
This is so breathtakingly beautiful and also heart wrenching at the same time. You have an amazing way with words and I love the way you convey Liam and his relationship to the other boys. I really loved this. I am adding you, I hope that is alright.
i aim my arrows high: 1D → Zalarryaimmyarrowshigh on January 9th, 2012 09:35 am (UTC)
Thanks so much! And sure, thanks for letting me know! :)
j is for james who took lye by mistake: Harry and Louis; face strokesky_somedays on January 13th, 2012 01:58 am (UTC)
this is stunning. I love the entire concept of Harry as the thing that draws them all together and the way you pull all the elements of that together and the prose itself. so gorgeous. ♥
i aim my arrows highaimmyarrowshigh on January 16th, 2012 12:26 am (UTC)
Thank you!
Your Worst Nightmarerp_ks_lova on February 26th, 2012 10:32 pm (UTC)
this is so so so lovely. It's beautiful.
i aim my arrows highaimmyarrowshigh on March 4th, 2012 07:45 am (UTC)
Ack, delayed reply (on my part) is delayed.

Thank you!!
flwrpwr_vampyreflwrpwr_vampyre on March 18th, 2012 02:42 pm (UTC)
Ugh, this is so pretty and I thought it was going to have a sad ending. I'm ridiculously relieved it didn't.
i aim my arrows highaimmyarrowshigh on February 17th, 2013 07:42 am (UTC)
(Delayed thank you -- the new link is here!)
blaineanderbabeblaineanderbabe on March 24th, 2012 10:22 am (UTC)
Beautiful, practically poetry. I haven't read a fic about the boys as good as this, and I doubt I ever will. You really have a way with words. Amazing, amazing, amazing. I just want to hug Liam now- and you.
i aim my arrows highaimmyarrowshigh on February 17th, 2013 07:42 am (UTC)
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snuffleslovesnuffleslove on April 11th, 2012 03:06 pm (UTC)
this was beautiful, ty for this. i've taken a liking to liam POV atm, and this is written with such clarity. thanks again! x
i aim my arrows highaimmyarrowshigh on February 17th, 2013 07:42 am (UTC)
(Delayed thank you -- the new link is here!)
Indiameus_astrum on June 18th, 2012 05:05 pm (UTC)
I am absolutely in love with this. This is just beautiful, oh my word. You really got all the characters spot on, I hope you write more in this fandom :)
i aim my arrows highaimmyarrowshigh on February 17th, 2013 07:42 am (UTC)
(Delayed thank you -- the new link is here!)
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