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aimmyarrowshigh
Mar. 4th, 2012 08:56 pm (UTC)
:3 Thank you! igrab has more-or-less convinced me to write a sequel, so I'll probably do that after the big bang. I'm so flattered that you like it! \o/
lovelydeity
Mar. 1st, 2012 04:58 am (UTC)
You have combined three of my favorite things in this: bacon, cuisine, and now 1D. YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE FICS WITH FOOD SMUT. I will read it all. I think I was more distracted by the food in this than all the hot Harry/Louis interaction. May need to go back and re-read this. Like now. With a glass of wine and the lights dimmed.
aimmyarrowshigh
Mar. 4th, 2012 08:57 pm (UTC)
Well, somehow everything I write ends up with more lush descriptions of food than of characters anyhow, so I'm sure I will eventually... :P

ILY!
arsenal4ever
Mar. 1st, 2012 05:11 am (UTC)
Oh wow I loved this so much. Your writing has such minute details in it, that just perfectly set the scene and make it into something REAL, rather than just a fluffy teenage writing. It has maturity and depth. And I love it (incase you didn't get that already!)

Also ... I think you should continue this ... y'know, just saying ... *hinthint* :) x
aimmyarrowshigh
Mar. 4th, 2012 09:00 pm (UTC)
Well, thanks! (And I'd hope it's not 'fluffy teenage writing' if only because I'm not a teenager, and I have a degree in creative writing, LOL!)

And I will likely be writing a sequel/Part II, but after the 1directionbang is over.
baratheons
Mar. 1st, 2012 09:24 am (UTC)
This was so, so amazing! I really love the detail on the food and the really vivid build up between them! Harry being the consummate professional and then being just a regular young man and flawed and passionate and this is pretty much one of my favourite AUs ever. :)
aimmyarrowshigh
Mar. 4th, 2012 09:02 pm (UTC)
:) Thank you so much! ♥
phatanita
Mar. 1st, 2012 11:26 am (UTC)
:D that was indescribably Cute with a capital C
aimmyarrowshigh
Mar. 4th, 2012 09:02 pm (UTC)
Thank you! :)
igrab
Mar. 1st, 2012 05:13 pm (UTC)
I quotespammed you a bit, but just again - oh. Oh. This is a beautiful work of art. And like art, it has a few imperfections but I actually think it adds to the whole? Because it ties in with Harry's story. And just, oh. Oh. tbh it makes me want a full novel of this. Just food porn and nervous chef Harry and Louis blossoming into being fucking gorgeous and hosting like a dream and niall is all I GIVE UP, I'M JUST GONNA RUN THE BOOKS FROM NOW ON, PRETTY BOY CAN GREET CUSTOMERS F O R E V E R and Harry cooks with boners every single day and he admits it to the press and says it makes the food taste better, if he's turned on while making it. and he scandalizes everyone and One Direction gets like 10x more popular and Liam falls in love with the interviewer, a culinary journalist named Danielle....


goddamnit basically this came out of nowhere but it's so beaut and you should be required to tell me about these things when you write them because i adore you.
aimmyarrowshigh
Mar. 2nd, 2012 08:33 am (UTC)
Hahahaha, if you want to write out that continuation of this story, you may!

Or actually maybe I will, sometime when I'm not dad!Harry-ing like crazy. I actually kind of love the prompt, a lot. Which is rare, because I NEVER write sequels/continuations of things.



ily
tyn
Mar. 1st, 2012 07:12 pm (UTC)
Omg this was perfect *___* I just -- UGH. <3
aimmyarrowshigh
Mar. 4th, 2012 09:02 pm (UTC)
Thank you! :)
aestivalblue
Mar. 3rd, 2012 03:28 pm (UTC)
this is my new favourite thing, it really is. you write sooo well.
aimmyarrowshigh
Mar. 4th, 2012 09:03 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much; I'm flattered that you like it! ♥
chetanlutah
Mar. 9th, 2012 04:50 am (UTC)
I can only hope that there are actual lovers as breathtakingly tender and raw out there like the Louis and Harry you wrote about. Sweet goodness, this was a wonderful reading. You were meant to write.
aimmyarrowshigh
Apr. 4th, 2012 03:55 am (UTC)
Thank you so much; I'm flattered that you like it! ♥
xonothingatall
Mar. 20th, 2012 03:17 am (UTC)
I have absolutely no words.

Their arms cocooned each other, a weave of Harry Louis Harry Louis, hands splayed flat, kneading and needing.

I don't even know how to react to this perfection. You are...wow. I just...wow. I can't find any words to express how amazing this is.
aimmyarrowshigh
Apr. 4th, 2012 03:55 am (UTC)
Thank you so much; I'm flattered that you like it! ♥
flwrpwr_vampyre
Mar. 24th, 2012 03:35 am (UTC)
This had me from the minute I read that the restaurant was called One Direction. What a great AU and all the food porn, I was dying. And of course the hand porn and the porn porn and ugh. I'll be over here needing more and more and more.
aimmyarrowshigh
Apr. 4th, 2012 03:56 am (UTC)
Thank you so much; I'm flattered that you like it! ♥
skiptothelu
Apr. 15th, 2012 11:34 pm (UTC)
Wow, this is so wonderful. Your wording is so, it's like a puzzle that you need to put each piece perfectly in place and when you lean back and see the entire thing as a whole, it's beautiful. That's a horrid analogy, but still this is wonderful. I love how you've painted this entire piece. I loved it.
aimmyarrowshigh
Aug. 2nd, 2012 09:35 am (UTC)
Oooooh, months-late response (on my part!) is months late, but thank you so much! ♥
looneyluna
May. 15th, 2012 05:08 am (UTC)
I love this. The combination of the sensuality of food with the careful dance that Harry and Louis are both trying to work through is fantastic. The pacing fit perfectly with telling this story.
aimmyarrowshigh
Aug. 2nd, 2012 09:35 am (UTC)
Oooooh, months-late response (on my part!) is months late, but thank you so much! ♥
krissy4now
May. 23rd, 2012 07:37 pm (UTC)
I read this for the first time a few weeks back, and I keep coming back to it because it's just so wonderful. I saw in the comments above that you're thinking of writing a sequel, and I really hope you do because this is such a fantastic world you've created here and I'd love to read more of it.
aimmyarrowshigh
Aug. 2nd, 2012 09:35 am (UTC)
Oooooh, months-late response (on my part!) is months late, but thank you so much! ♥
colazitron
Jun. 10th, 2012 03:13 pm (UTC)
Still one of the most amazing things. I want to climb this Harry like a tree.
aimmyarrowshigh
Aug. 2nd, 2012 09:35 am (UTC)
Oooooh, months-late response (on my part!) is months late, but thank you so much! ♥
wmyb7
Jun. 16th, 2012 09:56 am (UTC)
i love this so, so very much! everything about it is amazing, the way you have described everything, the characterization... the all of it. ahh i love the whole harry being protective of louis <3 you're a brilliant writer!
aimmyarrowshigh
Aug. 2nd, 2012 09:35 am (UTC)
Oooooh, months-late response (on my part!) is months late, but thank you so much! ♥
always_sakura
Jun. 27th, 2012 11:59 am (UTC)
OMG THE FOOD PRON IN THIS. I am so hungry right now D:

Besides amazing food descriptions...this really had a nice flow. Your writing is very well balanced, and everything happened so steadily and sweetly. Loved how your Harry is so smooth and solid and centred, and how your Louis adorably trips over his own words.

Thanks for writing ♥
aimmyarrowshigh
Aug. 2nd, 2012 09:35 am (UTC)
Oooooh, months-late response (on my part!) is months late, but thank you so much! ♥
mllesays
Jun. 30th, 2012 12:22 am (UTC)
Wow wow wow. This story is incredible. Sexy food, sexy boys — excellently done.
aimmyarrowshigh
Aug. 2nd, 2012 09:35 am (UTC)
Oooooh, months-late response (on my part!) is months late, but thank you so much! ♥
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